Fight Scene’s Done

I’d have to say, I’m happier it’s behind me.

It kind of feels like it’s going to need a bit of rework, but it’s better than it started.  More importantly, it’s served a purpose: the reader should have more of a view for the kind of person Mason is, and by association, Carter.

It’s almost Italy time.

Progress 20130904

See you tomorrow.


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