Blood On The Floor

I think I’m finally getting there.

After yesterday’s angsty ride, I’ve got to a place where I think that the action scene is coming together.  Today was spent re-writing (…again) chunks of it, and dropping a whole bunch on the floor.

I made just under 500 words of positive progress, but I’m feeling much better for it.  I’ll be losing another thousand words or so as I re-write that stuff tomorrow.  Safe to say though, we now have the scene nicely set up in a way that doesn’t sound contrived.

Progress 20130829

It’s also going to make Mason pissed.  Wow, man.  You’ve no idea.

See you tomorrow.

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